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Hi, I'm Loredana Carini

I'm a developmental editor with a BA Hnrs in Creative Writing and over 5 years worth of experience in the publishing industry. I've personally overseen the publication of over 10 books in the urban fantasy, fantasy, and paranormal romance genres.

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What is a developmental edit?

You'll need a developmental edit if you're concerned about any of the following:

Plot & Story

If there's something not quite coming together with the story or if there are too many plots and subplots and you're not sure what to cut.

Character Consistency

Are your characters not behaving? Do they come across as not liking each other when they should or vice versa? 

Pacing

If you've been given feedback that your story is reading too slow or is feeling rushed.

What you'll get from a developmental edit:

Books

1

Constructive Feedback

You can rest assured that all feedback I give will be constructive and only be in the interest of improving your work.

2

Solutions and Suggestions

For any feedback I give, I will make sure to give you advice and suggestions for how you can build from it. 

3

A Personal Touch

I'm here to work with you. If there's something in particular you would like me to look out for, please let me know in your email!

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